Trinity Mirror Response

• A nice starter activity - gets good engagement although perhaps (like mine!) it was a little too easy! 
• Video content is excellent - A great example of how revenue streams are changing for traditional print institutions. However, in terms of the presentation you needed to say more about why the video is significant

• You mention regional titles in the second slide but I'd like to see a lot more on this - a critical part of Trinity Mirror.
• Phone hacking is important to mention but like the rest of the presentation you raise an interesting point but then don't go on to say anything about it. It's important to go into depth at A level - this doesn't reach that standard.
• It's a shame because this is the basis for a great lesson.

WWW: I think my presentation was quite engaging as I used many visual aids such as the video and interesting clip art. Also, I mentioned many interesting points. 

EBI: I needed to elaborate on my points to an A level standard and I could have made my presentation longer to enable me to go into more depth. Moreover, I think my presenting skills are weak in general because I struggle to talk in front of groups of people, so I could have improved on my entire delivery of the presentation.